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GenrXr
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 Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 9:34 am Post subject: Flight 93 T-shirts can someone help me? |
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I recently wrote a reply to Kate about the movie flight 93 and would like to promote the movie sight unseen. Yes, the movie might be another Hollywood relativist dump, yet have faith it is the real deal.
I am going to make some t-shirts with the front saying Flight 93 and on the back of the shirt, part of the reply to Kate.
| Quote: | Everyone knew the fate of the Titanic and everyone knows the fate of flight 93, but we all want to be reminded of courage and acts of virtue. We all want to think of ourselves as being able to respond in the same fashion or be reassured there are amongst us those who are stronger and able to carry our weak burdens upon their shoulders.
It gives us hope, peace of mind and for this reason it will be a huge blockbuster. |
Yes it is a lot, but will work in this instance.
My problem is with my less then perfect syntax. (I am a guy) Any help making it look better would be greatly appreciated and you will receive a free shirt!
Plan on making 20 shirts tomorrow in Pensacola at a shirt fab.
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GenrXr
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| Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 9:42 am Post subject: |
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maybe the back should be
We all want to think of ourselves as being able to respond in the same fashion or be reassured there are amongst us those who are stronger and able to carry our weak burdens upon their shoulders.
It gives us hope, peace of mind and for this reason it will be a huge blockbuster.
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GenrXr
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| Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 9:44 am Post subject: |
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Maybe this for back?
We all want to think of ourselves as being able to respond in the same fashion or be reassured there are amongst us those who are stronger and able to carry our weak burdens upon their shoulders.
It gives us hope and peace of mind.
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kate
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| Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 9:50 am Post subject: |
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I'll give it a shot ....
| Quote: | We all know the fate of Flight 93
We all want to be reminded of courage and acts of virtue.
We all want to think of ourselves as being able to respond in the same fashion
or be reassured there are those amongst us who are stronger and abler to carry our burdens upon their shoulders.
It gives us hope…… |
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GenrXr
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| Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 9:57 am Post subject: |
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| kate wrote: | I'll give it a shot ....
| Quote: | We all know the fate of Flight 93
We all want to be reminded of courage and acts of virtue.
We all want to think of ourselves as being able to respond in the same fashion
or be reassured there are those amongst us who are stronger and abler to carry our burdens upon their shoulders.
It gives us hope…… |
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You just gave a good example of intelligent artistic (with rhetoric in mind) impression coupled with syntax trumping raw rhetoric by gXr.
grrr, I really do need to learn this whole language thing. (women have a way with words)
Thanks Kate,
Your idea is a new way to look at it and will most likely be used in some fashion.
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kate
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| Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 10:10 am Post subject: |
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aw thanks GenrXr 
think its a lil bit of LB/RB thingy and, keeping it simple
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